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Cover the requested points in a message

You may write a lovely message in Chinese and still lose credit because one thing the prompt asked for never appears.

On this page
  1. How do you turn a prompt into points?
  2. Worked example
  3. A plausible mistake
  4. Check yourself
  5. Where this leads next

A task prompt for a short message tells you who you write to and what to include. Each thing to include is a point, and each point needs its own clear sentence. This lesson shows how to turn the prompt into a checklist before you write.

The prompt and message here are original, written for practice. This skill sits inside foreign-language reading and writing and builds on reading a notice for its condition.

How do you turn a prompt into points?

Work in three short moves.

  1. Circle the audience. Is it a friend, a teacher, a neighbour?
  2. Number each instruction. A question such as “when?” or “what should they bring?” is one point.
  3. Write one sentence per point, then add a greeting and a closing line.

If you can tick every number in your draft, the message is complete. If one number has no sentence, you have found the gap before it costs you.

Worked example

Original prompt (invented): Your friend Mei Ling will visit your town next month. Write her a message. Tell her (1) what you plan to do on Saturday, (2) where you will meet, and (3) what she should bring.

Step 1. The audience is a friend, so a warm tone is right.

Step 2. Three points are numbered in the prompt.

Step 3. One sentence for each point, with a greeting and a closing line.

美玲你好,

听说你下个月要来我家,我很高兴。星期六我们打算去海边骑自行车,然后一起吃晚饭。我们九点在地铁站门口见面。请你带一件外套和一瓶水,因为海边风很大。期待见到你。

小文

Měilíng nǐ hǎo, tīngshuō nǐ xià ge yuè yào lái wǒ jiā, wǒ hěn gāoxìng. Xīngqīliù wǒmen dǎsuàn qù hǎibiān qí zìxíngchē, ránhòu yìqǐ chī wǎnfàn. Wǒmen jiǔ diǎn zài dìtiězhàn ménkǒu jiànmiàn. Qǐng nǐ dài yí jiàn wàitào hé yì píng shuǐ, yīnwèi hǎibiān fēng hěn dà.

Check against the points. Point 1 is 骑自行车 and 吃晚饭. Point 2 is 九点在地铁站门口. Point 3 is 外套 and 水. All three are covered, and the closing line fits a friend.

A plausible mistake

A student writes four sentences about how excited they are, the long journey Mei Ling will make and the weather last week. Each sentence is correct Chinese. None says where to meet, so point 2 is missing.

The correction is to write the points first and add extra sentences afterwards. Warm feelings belong in the greeting and the closing line, not in place of a point.

Check yourself

1. A prompt asks you to tell your teacher (1) why you were absent, (2) when you will return and (3) whether you need the homework. How many points are there, and what tone fits?

Show answer

Three points. The audience is a teacher, so use a polite tone, for example 老师您好 at the start and 谢谢老师 at the end.

2. Which sentence covers “when you will return”? A. 我昨天头很疼。 B. 我下星期一会回学校。 C. 请把作业给我。

Show answer

B. 下星期一 gives the time. A states a reason and C is about homework.

3. Write one polite sentence for point 3 (whether you need the homework).

Show answer

One model answer: 请问我需要补交这几天的作业吗? (Qǐngwèn wǒ xūyào bǔjiāo zhè jǐ tiān de zuòyè ma?) Other sentences are fine if they ask about homework clearly and politely.

Where this leads next

Linking your point sentences smoothly is the next skill: link simple sentences coherently. The audience register and purpose planner gives prompts to plan tone, and the writing revision compare view lets you compare two drafts. The mixed practice set tests it all.

A teacher in online one-to-one Chinese tuition can read your draft against the prompt line by line and show you which point went missing.

Questions people ask

How do I know which points the task wants?

Read the prompt and underline each instruction or question. Each one is a point to cover. A prompt that says to tell a friend when and where, and what to bring, has three points, not one.

Should I add extra detail beyond the points?

Cover the requested points first, each with at least one clear, complete sentence. Extra detail is useful only if it supports a point. A colourful detail that answers nothing in the prompt does not replace a missing point.

Do I have to write a formal message?

Match the audience in the prompt. A message to a friend can be friendly, while one to a teacher or neighbour needs politeness. Check how the audience is described and keep that tone from the greeting to the closing line.

How long should the message be?

Length and character limits depend on the qualification and task. Check the current Cambridge syllabus and specimen materials for your code, and confirm with your teacher, instead of copying a number from a forum.

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Your next step

If your messages read well but keep missing one point, a one-to-one teacher can mark your draft against the prompt and train the checking habit with you.

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