This set has ten questions on one short original passage, ordered from easier to harder. They cover reading, summary, effect, register and sentence control, so you can see where your answers hold up and where they need work. Write each answer before you open the explanation.
Use the original mixed-practice builder when you want a longer session, and keep a mistake log of what goes wrong.
The passage
By six o’clock the stallholders at Pasar Malam Taman Indah had been setting up for an hour. Mr Lim’s fan of paper lanterns hung crooked, but he left it; the smell of charcoal and pandan was already drifting over the car park. Nadia, who had sold kuih beside her grandmother every Friday since she was nine, counted the trays twice and frowned. This was the first evening that the stall was hers alone. Across the row, the new banner for the supermarket’s “Fresh Market Week” glowed above the crowd, brighter than every lantern in the lane.
Questions
1. (Easy) Which detail shows how long Nadia has helped at the stall?
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The detail is “every Friday since she was nine”. It is stated directly, so you can copy the key words as evidence, but keep the quotation short and do not copy the whole sentence.
2. (Easy) What can you infer about Nadia’s feelings about running the stall alone? Support your answer.
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She is anxious and determined to do it well. Evidence: she “counted the trays twice and frowned”, and the text stresses that this is “the first evening” the stall is “hers alone”. Two details agree, which makes the inference secure.
3. (Easy) A student writes: “Her grandmother must be ill.” Is this a sound inference?
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No. The passage does not say why the grandmother is absent, so this is speculation. A sound inference stays close to what the text gives, such as “Nadia is taking on new responsibility”.
4. (Medium) Explain what “drifting” means in “the smell of charcoal and pandan was already drifting over the car park”.
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It means spreading gently through the air without being forced, so the smell reaches people before they reach the stall. It suggests the scene is inviting. Avoid a circular definition such as “drifting means drifting along”.
5. (Medium) How does the writer make the supermarket banner seem powerful? Refer to specific words.
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The verb “glowed” gives the banner the quality of light, which draws the eye. The comparison “brighter than every lantern” sets it against the handmade lanterns and makes the small stalls look overshadowed. Together the words hint at competition for Nadia.
6. (Medium) In one sentence, summarise what makes the evening difficult for Nadia.
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Model: “Nadia is running the stall alone for the first time while a brighter supermarket banner competes for the crowd’s attention.” The crooked lantern and the charcoal smell are interesting details but do not answer the task, so they stay out.
7. (Medium) Combine these three sentences into one: “The banner was bright. The banner was bigger than the lanterns. The banner drew people’s eyes.”
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Model: “The supermarket banner was bigger and brighter than the lanterns, so it drew the crowd’s eyes.” The repeated subject is removed and the relationship, cause and result, is shown by “so”.
8. (Harder) Rewrite for a letter to the market committee: “Hey, the lights near our stalls are so dim lol, can you fix them?”
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Model: “We would be grateful if the lighting near the stalls could be repaired, as customers find it hard to see our goods.” The greeting slang, “lol” and the blunt request are replaced with polite, specific language.
9. (Harder) Correct the punctuation: “Nadia counted the trays, she frowned.”
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The comma splice joins two complete sentences with only a comma. Three repairs work: “Nadia counted the trays. She frowned.” or “Nadia counted the trays; she frowned.” or “Nadia counted the trays and frowned.”
10. (Harder) Replace the weak words: “The lane was very, very crowded, and Nadia went to the front of the stall.”
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Model: “The lane was packed, and Nadia hurried to the front of the stall.” One exact adjective replaces the stacked intensifiers, and “hurried” shows the movement instead of the flat “went”.
If you got these wrong
Match each mistake to the lesson that teaches the repair.
- Questions 1 to 3: locate an explicit detail and separate inference from speculation.
- Question 4: explain a phrase in its actual context and avoid circular definitions.
- Question 5: support an effect with precise textual evidence.
- Question 6: separate a relevant point from an interesting detail.
- Question 7: combine repeated ideas without losing meaning.
- Question 8: adapt the same idea for peers and adults.
- Question 9: repair a comma splice.
- Question 10: replace an imprecise verb and edit unnecessary intensifiers.
The clinic pages name two common difficulties with a worked repair: language analysis that names devices without effects and summaries that repeat rather than combine.
Where to go next
For a fuller set on one skill, open the practice page of a module, such as writer choices and effects. The learning guide lists them all.
Answers to open tasks like these are easier to judge when someone reads your actual sentences. That is what online one-to-one English First Language tuition offers.