这套练习有十道原创题，由易到难，涵盖 词汇与精确表达 的全部五课。第 1 至 3 题针对单词和搭配，第 4 至 7 题针对套话、时态和强调，第 8 至 10 题混合所有技能。每个句子都是专为本页写的，并且保留英文，因为考试用英文作答。
先写出自己的答案，再打开解答。有几道题接受不止一种好的写法，所以请依据解答里的推理来判断，而不是要求完全一致。你可以用 写作修改对比视图 把修改和原文并排，并用 错误记录本 记下反复出现的失误。
题目
1. 替换弱动词：He got the parcel from the post office before it closed.
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Got 可以表示收到、买到或取来。这里的动作是去一个地方把包裹取走，所以 collected 最准确。
He collected the parcel from the post office before it closed.
2. 选出最准确的动词并说明理由：The wind ______ the washing off the line.（moved / ripped / went）
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Ripped。 它说出的是突然而有力的动作。Moved 对把衣服从晾衣绳上扯下来的风来说太轻，而 went 在这里不能带宾语。Tore 也可以。
3. 改正两处搭配：The company did a serious mistake and must take the responsible.
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Did a mistake 应改为 made a mistake，因为错误用 make。Take the responsible 在需要名词的地方用了形容词：take responsibility。
The company made a serious mistake and must take responsibility.
4. 填空；如果选错，请说出错误类型：Please ______ attention to the safety notice.（give / pay / put）
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Pay。 Pay attention 是固定搭配。选错通常是直译造成的，因为有些语言用“给”或“放”来表达这个意思。
5. 句子 Throughout the ages, everyone has loved football 被用来开始一篇关于校内联赛的作文。请改写成你能够站得住脚的说法。
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Throughout the ages 是夸大，因为我们今天所知的足球并不古老。Everyone 也是夸大。站得住脚的版本：
Football is the sport that fills our school field every Friday afternoon.
它具体、可以核对，也能引入作文主题。
6. 说明哪里有问题：The small cut on his finger was the tip of the iceberg, and it healed by evening.
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The tip of the iceberg 暗示有大得多的隐藏问题。一个傍晚就愈合的小伤口藏不住任何东西，所以这个说法造成了错误的画面。平实的写法更好：The small cut on his finger healed by evening.
7. 修改时态：When the bell rang, the students pack their bags and ran for the gate.
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基准是过去时（rang、ran），所以 pack 是失误。
When the bell rang, the students packed their bags and ran for the gate.
8. 修改视角和时态：I opened the letter slowly. She felt her pulse race and you can hardly breathe.
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叙述者是过去时的 I。She 和 you 是视角失误，can 是时态失误。
I opened the letter slowly. I felt my pulse race and I could hardly breathe.
9. 修改加强词，同时不丢失意思：It was a really very delicious meal and we were extremely full.
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先删去，再选准确的词或加细节。两个好的版本：
It was a delicious meal and we were full.（平实）
It was a superb meal, and we left too full to move.（准确的词加细节）
把 very 换成 extremely 不算修改。
10. 按五项技能修改这个段落，并列出每处改动：Last Saturday, I go to the market and get some fruit. The really strong rain made a lot of noise on the roof, and everyone in the world was very scared.
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修改后的版本： Last Saturday, I went to the market and bought some fruit. The heavy rain drummed on the roof, and the stallholders looked frightened.
改动：
- go 改为 went：时态一致。
- get 改为 bought：准确的动词。
- strong rain 改为 heavy rain：搭配。
- made a lot of noise 改为 drummed：准确的动词与细节。
- everyone in the world 改为 the stallholders：夸大的说法。
- really … very scared 改为 frightened：删去加强词。
只要准确并符合场景，其他措辞也可以接受。
如果你做错了
| 出了什么问题 | 题号 | 去学习 |
|---|---|---|
| 保留了含糊的动词，或选了不合适的动词 | 1, 2, 10 | 替换不够精确的动词 |
| 用了不自然的搭配或直译的说法 | 3, 4, 10 | 选择符合语境的自然搭配 |
| 保留了夸大或自相矛盾的套话 | 5, 6, 10 | 避免扭曲原意的背诵式套话 |
| 漏掉了时态或人称的转换 | 7, 8, 10 | 保持时态和叙述视角一致 |
| 把一个加强词换成另一个 | 9, 10 | 删改不必要的加强词 |
如果每一行都有错，请回到 模块概览，按顺序学习各课，并为每一课写出自己的例子。
多数学生发现，自己几乎所有失误都集中在一两种类型上。在 线上一对一 English First Language 补习 中，老师可以读你改正后的段落，说出其中的规律，并选出与之匹配的下一项任务。