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句子构建与改写:原创综合练习与解析

你已经分别学过每项句子技能,现在想看看混在一起时它们是否仍然稳固。

这套题共十二道原创题。大致按由易到难的顺序,涵盖合并句子、清楚指代、强度、词族和缩短句子。每个句子都是为本页撰写的,没有一道来自考试试卷。

应该怎样使用这套题?

先在纸上写下你的答案,再打开解析。许多题有不止一个好答案,所以请把你的版本与示范答案对照,检查推理,而不只是用词。给每道题设一个较短的限时,因为真正的任务是有时间限制的。

用摘要选句与改写工作室试写你自己的句子,并把每个错误记录在错题记录与重测队列中。写作修改对比视图能帮你看出修改改变了什么。如果想了解学习顺序,请回到句子构建与改写的单元总览。

题目

1. 用表示结果的连接词合并成一句:The rain stopped. The match continued.

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The rain stopped, so the match continued. 第二件事是第一件事的结果,所以 so 表示结果,前面加逗号。The match continued after the rain stopped 也正确。

2. 改正连写句:Hana practises every day, her pronunciation is improving.

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Hana practises every day, and her pronunciation is improving. 两个完整句子需要比逗号更强的连接。分号或句号也行。Because Hana practises every day, her pronunciation is improving 则表现出原因。

3. 合成一句:The museum is free. It is close to the station. Many tourists visit it.

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Because the museum is free and close to the station, many tourists visit it. 前两个事实是第三个的原因。它们主语相同,所以 and 连接它们,不必再写第二个 the museum is。

4. 去掉重复的名词:The school has a new library. The library has two quiet rooms.

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The school has a new library, which has two quiet rooms. 关系从句把第二个事实接到名词上。用 It 也可以,但 which 让联系更紧密。

5. 这句为什么不清楚?请改写。When Ben met Omar, he was carrying a heavy box.

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He 可能是 Ben,也可能是 Omar。选出你想说的那一个:When Ben met Omar, Ben was carrying a heavy box,或 Ben, who was carrying a heavy box, met Omar. 重复名字比让人猜更好。

6. 哪一个保持了 Regular sleep can improve concentration 的强度?(a) Regular sleep always improves concentration. (b) Regular sleep is able to improve concentration. (c) Regular sleep will certainly improve concentration.

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(b)。 Can 和 is able to 都表示可能。Always 和 will certainly 比原句的说法强得多。

7. 保持同样的数量来改写:Nearly every visitor complained about the queue.

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The great majority of visitors complained about the queue. Nearly every 和 the great majority of 都接近“全部”。保留 complained,因为换成 were unhappy 会稍微削弱力度。Some visitors 就错了。

8. 用正确的词形填空:The guide gave us very ______ (inform) answers.

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informative。 空格在 very 和名词 answers 之间,所以需要形容词。Information 是名词,在这里不合适。

9. 用正确的词形填空:Everyone admired her ______ (determine) to finish the race.

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determination。 在 her 之后需要名词。Determined 是形容词,会用在 her determined effort 里。

10. 缩短,并保留两个条件:You may enter the laboratory only when a teacher is present and only if you are wearing safety glasses.

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Enter the laboratory only with a teacher present and while wearing safety glasses. 两个条件是有老师在场和戴护目镜。它们都保留了,用 and 连接,only 仍然管着两者。

11. 缩短,且不丢条件:The shop will give you a refund if you bring the receipt within fourteen days, unless the item was on sale.

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Refunds need a receipt within fourteen days, except for sale items. 条件有三个:收据、十四天和特价品的例外。如果句子以 Refunds need a receipt within fourteen days 结尾,就丢了例外,所以是错的。

12. 把这四句写成一个清楚的句子:The bus was very late. It was raining heavily. The students waited. The students got wet.

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The students got wet while they waited in the heavy rain for the late bus. 这里 heavy rain 和 late bus 把描述放进名词短语,取代了两个句子。另一个好答案是 Because the bus was late and it was raining heavily, the students got wet while they waited. 请检查四个事实是否都在。

如果你答错了

按错误类型给每道错题分类,再回到对应的课。

题号错误类型前往
1, 2, 3连写句、连接偏弱或句子零碎合并短句,避免连写句
4, 5指代不清或重复用清楚的指代替换重复名词
6, 7改写改变了确定程度或数量重述意思而不改变强度
8, 9空格用错了词形按语法角色使用词族
10, 11, 12丢了条件或事实缩短句子并保留关键条件

如果一个错误看起来同时属于两种类型,先修正意思上的错误。语法完美但意思错误的句子,照样丢分。

当你第二遍阅读时,大部分这类错误都能自己找出来并改正,自学可能已经够用。如果同一类错误反复出现,也可以在线上一对一英语作为第二语言补习中,与老师一起检查你自己的句子。

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